Hi ~*Moloko Vellocet*~

Wonderful poem! Fantastic imagery especially the opening lines:

"I'd like to take your face

And place it on my wall."

Sent a tingle through my body when I read it!

I really like the way the poem is arranged. Fragmented. Works really nicely with the flipping between styles. I also liked the inclusion of the rhyme "Don't step on a crack, or you'll fall and break your back" which you've twisted really nicely!

Love, bruises, glitter and scars,
~*Scarie Faerie*~
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Oooh...I like it.

Very awesome! Great use of words! Love it!