Well it's a pretty poem, but I think it didn't quite say what you saw(going from the A/N).

This is very nice, however I liked the A/N better than the poem! Sorry! The actual poem was not quite the same as I thought it would be. It was more a love sort of thing, or so it seemed. Don't get me wrong, I still liked the poem, but the summary was a bit misleading!

this is beautiful! yay! I've never been to Niagra Falls but they sound amazing, espescially with that one rose. I like this very muchly, I can't write poems... ah well! That makes yours seem more beautiful to me! very well written and me likses it alotses!(I just got back from a five-day mission trip earlier today. How wonderful to find at least three updates from you, I have to go read the others, and make myself find the time to read the ASOB Epilogue thingy. bye!~Angel*

I love! That is excellent! It kind of reminds me of Eowyn- Her beauty is so heavenly/
Since on a precipice she grows. Beautiful! PS- the LOTR DVD comes out in August.

**sniff** Not fair! Even your Author's Note was well written! **sigh** Oh well... anywho, on to the review (perhaps I should read the poem first **grin**) - ooOOooo, that was beautiful!!! **jumps up and applauds wildly** I do so LOVE your poetry!!!! Oh, and I'm working on chapter 30, but it won't be up for awhile. However I'm thinking about putting up the second chapter of 'The Legend of Layre' before I leave this weekend... and I must call you too.. **ArwenStar** P.S. I really did love the poem, but you know how hard it is not to ramble! =o)

I liked it, but I found the "he" confusing? Is he supposed to be the person who sees the rose? Just my thoughts... Othewise, very good. Maybe I should try my hand at poetry some time (or maybe not).