wow.....that was really beautiful-really i really mean it

What a nice work of literature...it has a great message.

very eloquently written. i think it either is the wishes of a person when they die, or the wishes of a person after they leave someone's life (e.g. love relationship, a child growing up and leaving, etc.) It'd be nice if you could write the true meaning of this poem in the fanfic since i have a feeling i didn't get it.

I remeber one of my suicide notes. This is basically it. Different words, yet the same meaning. Great peice of work. Wonderful. Don't ever stop writing. You have got some amazing talent.

I loved your poem.It's deep and very truthful......I'd like to be rmembered that way asa well!Keep up the good work

Aaah... sometimes I feel that I like that kind of poem best: no hidden meanings or metaphors, just raw emotion. Keep it up.