 Rayne Maker 2003-06-11 . chapter 1This one, too, was very in depth. I like the way it just rolled off the tongue, and your word choice made me think. Wonderful. No errors. |
 NanakiWolfe 2002-11-21 . chapter 1... I think I can relate... |
 Toireasa 2002-01-27 . chapter 1Very nice. It's sad as well, that you have to put up masks. I suppose everyone must, but it might be wise if you start trying to take them down. Anyways, wonderful poem, really hit close to home.
--Toireasa |
 KittyCat1 2002-01-25 . chapter 1Veeeery good. Excelent. Keep up the work and dun stop writin'! |
 sierra 2002-01-24 . chapter 1 I loved it! It made me cry because I feel the same way |
 Soccergirl 2002-01-24 . chapter 1 I liked it! |
 Mackenzie Anderson 2002-01-24 . chapter 1this is such a wonderful poem. ive wondered this often myself, if people actually see what's really there... |