wow this is such a gr8 poem. its different from any other poem ive ever read. the way u rote it really let me capture the scenario and the wat the girl felt. it wuz a reeeeaaaally gud poem. keep it ^!

*sniff* such a good story...
anyway I think that the girl was really nice to stick up for a stranger. Not that I need someone to stick up for me, I do that very well myself.
btw I tend to think that girls are better at disguising their feelings and emotions that guys... tend being the key word, there are a lot of exceptions.

that wuz so great. i feel like that many times, though people rarely see through the facade. i love the way you captured the picture of the girls in the hallway. it wuz truly genious.

Hey Charlene! It's a good poem! So nice! Reminds be of how a really good friend could pick you up right when you're about to give up.

this is such a gr8 poem! i luv it! its so sweet...

wow...that was so...beautiful! *sniffle* poor girl

very touching... yes very touching. :'(
as i go through my trials and sufferings i wish i had a person like tat, but i kno God is with me all the way. i shall conquer my ordeals and take pleasure in my tribulations. O:-)
if you ever need a friend and cannot find one, then look for me. i'll always be free for people who need me... :')

OOOoooOOoohhh!! this is really good! :D

Wow, Charlene! This is great! It's so sweet! :-) I love it!