wow...that is awesome. i can relate to the whole thing. its really good. good job

Expressional...once again I was overcome by the emotions flooding out of your words. I like the ending. Letting us know that you covet the girl is wise.I enjoyed it. You have a gift.

it always is more difficult when it's a girl... but it's worth it. beautiful poem

there is no such thing as best(est) friends...it's just another myth that we have created to escape reality and it's problems...nicely written, i like