I don't know what to say. Nothing I write here is ever going to do justice in discribing this and how moving it is. Really, I'm speechles. It's just incredible. Wonderful.

aww...sad...this aint no bad poem...i like it...r+r mi stuff?...aint as good as yours:P ;)

i dont know what to say about this poem. To me it makes perfect sence.you just have to look at it a certant way. If you dont you wouldn't unstand. you have to know what it is like to go threw that. To wait for real pain to sink in. This is a good poem. It gets under your skin and makes you think. Who you are. Do you know if you are this way or are you plain jane? And it makes you think how much pain can one life take before you stop feeling anything?

Depressing but brilliant. Alot of meaning to that poem, deffinently lot's of meaning. Keep Writing~CF

ooooooohhhhhh... gooooooood... i like, i like lots. You just get better as you go. :)

Great poem. Sorry for not being constructive, but it's past 12 and I'm really tired. I liked the rhyme scheme though. Good work.