I really loved your story Fireworks. I was so glad that Tetra and Asaire where able to live happily. ek. Good job. sorry im not so talkative, kinda tired XD I started getting obsessed with Original fictions few days ago so I'm looking around. have a good day/night/morning/time.

That was the BEST story I have ever read.. Now I am going to search through your page to see if I can find anymore. ^^

Lovely story; I just read the whole thing in one sitting. The descriptions of Asaire's acts were delightfully entertaining and creative. I'm confused about one thing, though... At the end of chapter 23, it says that Oma found three bodies, but only two deaths are written about. I think. Did I miss something?

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o i luv this story ^^

That was by far one of the most beautiful endings I've ever had the pleasure of reading

XD Oh my gosh... I loved this! ^_^^_^ It was so super-duper amazing! *squee!*

Wonderful story! And, such a unique plot, too. May I take your story's hand in marriage? 'Cause I certainly love it that much.

Sweet! You had me hating and loving you all through the story, evil evil person. :: dances in happiness ::

Love it!

OH. i know whats going to happen... his dad is actually the king...

Love it!

Really ggod so far. love the Asaire character.

I liked it. over-Describing is good.

I loved it! Fantastic. spectacular. right more!