Reviews for Love and War formerly As Of yet not title

KC-Smith 2004-01-08 ch 1,	abuseWow, your writing is very impressive and I love your descriptions. Celeste is a very stong character and I exspect great things from her. The only thing I found troublesome was the end, I had a hard time keeping the characters straight. Otherwise, wonderful job!
Radical Chic 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abuseI like your story, but it gets a bit jumpy at parts and hard to follow. I think if you separated dialoge by the person talking, it would make it easier to read. That one large chunk of writing in the middle is taxing on a persons eyes. Your story is very good though, the concept is interesting. Keep writing.
Star Drake 2002-01-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is rather good, just it is hard to tell who is speaking and who they are speaking too. You need to put some more descrption your characters, and to your scenes.
Selena O'Brian 2002-01-25 ch 1,	abuseAll feedback welcome. please Read and Review. thank u ~Selena~