Aww they are both so beautiful and romantic! They leave you longing for something like that to happen to you! Wonderful imagery - well done!
Flenda

I love love stories! Even for those of us dating, such lovely romantic pictures as these strike of an idyllic fantasy. I want to be loved like that...

WRITE MORE! :)

Wow, really good description...very nice.

It was good but may I suggest that you paragraph it? The solid block of writing is hard to read and can totally put someone off from reading a story. It was a nice story in an unexplained sorta way. I like the description of the rain and the ocean and... I like all of it. I dont know what else to say. It's good.