good poem thuie... i kno how it feels. and remember this one quote that i have: "luv sux." this is really powerful and emotionally deep... and i can get wat ur tryin to say w/ the blood... well, keep writing!!!

wow. dat'z some good **. dude, i sound like i'm talkin about pot...hehe, n-e-way, i luv u, n i've been there. ur right, luv izn't worth the pain, not at 13. we have our whole lives 2 grow up, y should we have 2 start now? it'z 2 much. i miss my dresses, barbies, and plastic batman bookbag. yes every1, BATMAN!!!! haha, i wuz odd, even then. well, that wuz such a kewl poem and with ur permission, i would like 2 adopt it as the poem of my life. no kidding. i just wanna 4-get ezra n jordan and...that otha guy u no about...well, i must go. luv ya babe, m/!

I've felt this way a few times myself, very expressive poem.

*sniff* i just like reading this poem...:) oh and by the way, hurley...you have no life. :P

awww how sad. that jerk. he seems to break a LOT of hearts lately. be happy keep da luv

hey guess where i am...yep computers...lisa and jamie and amanda are reading over my computer at this very moment i speak....yo, that poem was all deep and **, it was remarkable (im using microsoft words synonyms thing cant u tell?) wow, it was really good man

wow...thu...very contraversial (sp?) poem...it's good...and long...very loooooooooooooooooong...yup...bye

The blood is a metaphor. Hello?

and NO I AM NOT FLATTERING MYSELF contrary to popular beleif
and NO I AM NOT PARANOID.....maybe of centipedes, but thats it

yea and its still a good poem

Okay, for all of you who completely misread this, you are so stupid! Hurley, don't flatter yourself that she'd write a poem about you. It's just about her life in general and this is how she expresses the way she feels. Don't think that she wants to end your friendship or whatever, or that everyone is against you. It's a freaking poem! Get over it and chill out. You're paranoid. Don't get the impression that Thu-Thu would write everything just about you. It's not even ABOUT you. You are just a part of her life. This review is turning out like a note to Hurley. Thu-Thu, my dear friend, is getting upset over this because everyone totally and completely misread her poem. She doesn't need this. Please don't get mad, but I'm just explaining. Thu's my friend.

do the words try try again mean anything to u?
ok, a first, LOVE AT 13!!!!?????
o c'mon we dont get serious *at least most people*
until we get to college
and if u think that u can find ur 'lover'on ur first try, ur way out of ur league
second, ur not a frikin reject as u so many times referred to it in the poem
does me not liking u that way make u a reject?
ABSOLUTELY NOT
third, u might claim that ur not doin this, but ur turning everyone against me, dats not cool
suck my *** by autumn eve? thnx a lot
by the way, ur poem is still very amazing

Nice poem. Don't get mad at Hurley or let this end a friendship, but if it does u can always come to conflict managers, we can help. :-D








Please don't hurt me! I'm just defending Hurley because he's my friend, I know he can be annoying sometimes but he's still a nice guy.

so i see that u have no pain or guilt about posting this? ok ok i understand.........
because i dont care enough???
HELLLOOOO
does anything i have ever done for u, to u matter?
just cuz i dont like u as a girlfriend, does that impede everything?
r u gonna let me ruin this ruin our friendship?
unfortunatly for u it does and if u want it to thats fine, but its definetly wrong
i understand how u feel
beleive me
it has happened to me, but we didn't ruin our friendship
i can prove it, and i will if u want me to
ok ok
its on now,
u started it, ur ending it
ur choice

*by the way, its still a great poem

MEN ARE SCUM! I know...I've said that so many times before...it's true!!! They ruin our lives...and for what? Poor Thuie!! :-(

Just lovely. All that blood! Well, I got the picture, not blood, but something that wasn't physical. Great, great writing, but one thing: You're not a reject!!