You really have a truely magnificent talent for writing poetry- really, you do. And even sometimes I think of my work as measly little rants that cannot compare- especially to a work like this. Though it would almost be inspiring if you havn't already used all the words you possibly could- and so well thought out. Definatly a favorite of mine ^_^ KIU~

Awwwwww! I'd say more but I just got back from a camping trip and i'm SO tired and can't type very well right now. It was cold to say the least. lol ~Woodelf193/Elf Girl/Evil Elven Toaster/Evil Toaster Girl~ (I have a lot of pen names. I'm now on my "evil toaster stage)

wow. i'm speechless! this is a really great poem! i love it! it's kinda depressing though.

Wow! I love it! You're such a good writer, I'm very envious. This is so descriptive, and it flows so well. It's one of those poems where you can just let the words wash over you, not even really listening, and still it seeps into your bones, invades your soul. I loved the eerie, haunting note to it; it is very beautiful. You should look into getting some of your poetry published. Happy Writing!

Hey, don't worry about asking for a favour. :) Well, this story/poem is really quite unique, in the way that it's longer than most poems would normally be, but it has the poem characteristics (rhyme, rhythem, metaphorical significance, etc). I like how you repeated those 2 lines throughout, it ties the whole thing together nicely. This is the kind of work that really stands out... I really like it! :) -ac-

Yo Eladriewen,
I told you I'd review. I'm sorta scared now. Do you need to talk about something with someone? Though it was a good poem. Keep up the good work.

I *really* should not have read that. Um...waaaah is pretty much all I can say. I've had a few relatives leave on me in the same fashion. It's nice to find a peace in death though. I wish I still did English, but then I'd analyse this too much. Beautiful.