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| .the twinkling of an eye 2005-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseHehe. Well done! |
| equitable division 2003-12-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. Your real haiku's are just as good if not better than your mock ones. I think I could actually manage to read a book of haiku published by the Police. Currently, I can barely gag through some of the shite that's on this site, nevermind the stuff that's published. Keep up the good work, you manly men. (We're men, we're men in tights - tight tights) |
| Adrienne 2003-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseto "Ice Mice"; First, "amatuers"(it's spelled "amateur")? What the hell do you think you are? A professional? You're an amateur, just like everyone else here, because you don't get paid for your writtings nor are any of your works published (Posting them online doesn't count as published). Second, did you ever stop to think that maybe the poem wasn't meant to be funny? No...I forgot you "were too busy seething with anger", which means you were too ** because *gasp* someone doesn't have something nice to say to you?? Oh dear god...Stop the world... I'm sick of people confusing "flames" with ** criticism. To "flame" would be to review/e-mail someone saying something along the lines of "you suck your story sucks i hate it/you. you should die." ...much like what you're doing. Criticism is where you point out FLAWS in someones writings, so they can fix it. All the people reviewing with something nasty to say are the ones who need to get their heads out of their asses. |
| The Ice Mice 2002-08-25 ch 1, | abuseFirstly we must say that we hated this haiku and it was not funny to us at all because we were too busy seething with anger at your review on our stories. In writing both of them, we didn't see anything that remotly resembled a haiku. So, frankly, that makes you the idiots. Yes, we can all count syllables, but REALLY, we can write them with our eyes closed. And please, next time you flame us, sign in. Its so unprofessional not to sign in. It makes you look like amatuers, which is, truthfully, what you write like. Sincerely yours, and with a cool temper this time, Nestrik Ciorstaidh of the Ice Mice |
| Sun Chime 2002-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHmmmm... I liked the first 'real haiku' better, but not bad. |
| Aesthete 2002-07-27 ch 1, | abusei don't wanna sound stupid....but just what r u tryin to say through this haiku? |
| Raspberry Ginger 2002-05-24 ch 1, | abuse*panting* stop, stop it, seriously, my tummy hurts from laughter... |
| ~*GypsyQueen*~ 2002-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseDarlings I loved it, You should really write some more, But what do I know? I know a cute haiku when I see one and this is a cute haiku! *dances around in a giddy circle* |
| Emily M. Hanson 2002-03-01 ch 1, | abuseROTFL!!! Thanks for the review. |
| EmptyStages 2002-02-14 ch 1, | abusevery cool, i must say... |
| Jedi Knight 2002-02-03 ch 1, | abuseYou rock. |
| toyouke 2002-02-01 ch 1, | abuseWell...I guess it's a "real" haiku, if by "real" you mean "boring". It was better when you mocked other people who don't count. |
| Meegwun 2002-01-28 ch 1, | abuseheh heh heh... 'now where is my oar'... hilarity. :) |
| Zorak 2002-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseZorak regrets telling the HKP to write more haiku. Why the nature????? ONLY APOCALYPSE!!!! MWEH HEH HEH HEH HEH!!!!! |
| Haiku-Dude 2002-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseTwas humorous. I enjoyed it very much. A real, deep, Haiku. |