maya lisa and mandi...how could you have not gotten it? yes it's a metaphor. she even told you that! "Compares my life to my bus ride prison." *sigh*

HAHAHA i love this... my bus is exactly the same. There is this like 500lbs kid that sits next to me. Oh he drives me insane sometimes. They all have such sick minds. All they ever talk about is masterbation. That gets so old. And the bus driver is allways yelling. Anyways... good poem.

hunni, ur the best! i no it'z a little late n all, but maya lisa n i were readin that in computers about 10 years ago, n we were like, dude, IT'Z A BUS! but i get it now. lolz! i luv u, m/.

wow...*speechless from foul language* my virgin ears! i agree with stacy. japs in the front and losers in the back. me? im just stuck in the middle

::begins pondering:: wait...it's not about a bus? well you coulda told us that...::crosses arms:: you're so mean to us...darn...um....MOFO! hehe..." i be playin' wit ya, sista" hehe...dum dee dum...HAPPY NEW YEAR! yiiiiiiiiiipppppyyyyyyyyy!!!!!111

Ohhh...it's not really about a bus??? ohhhhhhh....everything is so clear to me now....then like, what is about, like, life or something? ohhhh....a metaphor...i understand! ok, yea, that makes the poem better now....ok im off to write some poetry. or u know, play neopets.

thu...great poem...but it's a BUS for Christ's sake! hehe...anyway...have fun beeing anti-social my fellow "trend-setters"

Great poem, lots of depth...but its a bus!!! I go on the same bus everyday man, its not thaat horrible, as long as they dont start harassing you about your new boots, its not thaat bad....its a bus!! good job

hehe. tat was great!!!!!!!!!! i loved da essay. you have such great emotions thu. it's ashtounding. i enjoyed the cursing and swearning ("don't curse thu!") although i always tell pplz not to. O:-)

wow i love your message here... i like the way you think. write more. :)

*blinks* sheesh...u were *@^%ed off...teehee...describes my bus perfectly too! :)

This is really good. I like it a lot. A bit depressing, but like you said, how many of your poems are actually happy? Jk, jk. Oh yeah, in case you forget--"Anywhere But Here".

Awww, Thuie...bus rides suck...

It's Autumn & Julie B and Dani too... omg I think I'm going to cry, I love it soo much! My fav parts are the quoting Les Mis and "** u" - nice spelling, pal - those rule! I love you.