I never realised that you had this poetry bottled up inside you, Mako. Like the others, I can reflect on your situation -- hey, we all went through it once in our lives, didn't we?
hey i know presisly how you fell hey i'v had peaple call me edger allen poe because almost every stich of my poem are dark dank and dreary and if there not that there vengfull and bloody but hey stay frosty*=)
p.s. exalent poem jupiter
Why is it that I can apply all the deprresing/semi-depressing things to my life? Oh well, good poem. It gives a view of what life is like for some teenagers. Oh, damnit!! I sound like my English teacher!!!