That was awesome!

More? Onegaishimasu?

are you going to continue this???
please do!!! :)

Hey Chilayse, great fic, I'd love to see more. Even though you know I'm not a fan of yaoi I still like you're writing style. And this one's kinda cute too, not too citrusy. Keep it up!!

Cookie ga arimasan?

heh. it's cute. i like it. i hope u write more. u really do write shounen ai/yaoi really well. ^^ baiz!

Damn ff.n ... anyways .. please please please update this one!!! I love it so far!!! *begs* pleeeeease!? *grins*

its good continue continue

See? ^.^ I told you i'd read it! ^.^ It's good! You should put your other stuff up here.

wow! i love this! its one of the best stories i have read in awhile and i can't wait to read more of it... you're a very talented writer and i almost felt as though i was also there with them lol update soon!!

Oh, wow. This is a really good story. Good writing, interesting characters. I can't wait for the second part!