This has real potential, but I'd like to see some spacing between paragraphs, okay? It'll make it worlds easier to read and understand. Really powerful beginning, by the way. The "In the beginning, there was nothing, in the end, there was nothing," brought everything together nicely.

I think that this is a pretty cool story. Please add more!

i like...all the better for its brevity. it's quite poetic with so much meaning contained in so few words while remaining prose. tres cool.

Sounds like you have a good start! I'd like to read more. Keep it up!

Meagan... it's me! it sounds really good so far! i think you're doing well, and yes! we do have to write another story! Soon!

I like this... it peaks my interest. *Adds to favourites* I'm going to keep a track of it... it's got tension, you know? Atmosphere. I like it. I'm also writing something post-apocalyptic, but it isn't half as lyrical and flowing as yours. It's good - well done! ^_^