This one's nice. I like how you twist the question you were asked, back to the audience (I suppose you could say that's who you're speaking to).

oh, i like this one. its got a real.. dirty, cruddy feel. a close to earthness. like american history x. like the fleas that crawl on the underbelly of society, like the muck in the bottom of the barrel... hmm i like it

That's cool, the way you ended it off with a question... it leaves mystery behind it all. I like it!

-al

I did like it. very much. tictacs...hmm...NOPE! Won't getcha high. but if you can prove me wrong, let me know...

like the tying in with the beginning... very all over the place, but cool at the same time... good job, 8.5/10

Hm. It's very well-written (I think I need a new vocabulary...or a thesaurus...but anyway) and it's vaguely disturbing. Strange, yes, but in a good way. It reminds me of the musical group Catatonia...but as I seem to be the only person who's heard of them, that probably means nothing to you. :) Keep up the *fantastical* work!

it's not weird! it's challenging! bahaha! the speaker is telling the other person to get out of his/her space. maybe, even, it's a girl going against the stereotypical boundaries women are supposed to have. good!

I like it!

See? It's short.

interesting...is this another relationship thing? The tic tac thing is kinda weird, but i like it.

Me likes this one very much! It's very highschooler goer typical. ) And I just noticed that I've been putting "Wu" instead of "Obake-chan" AHHHH!-!

great piece...i hope to see more pieces like this on ...