Incredible.

ach, i know this feeling. this is wonderful

You are a really talented poet... I love some of the images you create here... especially about reality being quicksand... I love the picture I form in my head while I am reading this... you have the gift!

The pace and play on words is great here.
The images and sensations are classic
and spun to a unique note.
Yet another jaded bullseye!

;)

as ever:
s p y r e

this is great, I like the descriptions, it reminds me of a music clip

Hey! Really cool poem. U managed to capture all those sensory experiences that are so hard to capture. Well done! I especially like the quicksand analogy, and the effect u gave the last two lines is really good.