Wonderful. There's nothing in my eloquence that can describe how I truly feel about this piece, and I don't think any words could quite justify the profound meaning and powerful beauty of this piece. But first off, I liked how you portrayed your character in three separate parts, one being Charlotte, one being Charlie, and the other simply being 'me'. The words that are being said are eloquent, thus making this already heartwrenching piece take on a whole new level. The psychology in this piece was great as well. Beautiful, eerily haunting, and ethereally written with such grace and sophistication that I can only gape at the computer screen, wondering how something this great could even be concievable. I've been a fan of some of your works, but now, I think that I can give you a proper review. Do keep up the excellent work.

chibichocobo

this is such an awesome piece! the emotion and detail is incredible. you're a wonderful writer, and i love your style, because it flows so well.