i like this poem alot, it is the first i read of yours, and it is really good

Don't Say You love me, u dont even no me...what a gr8 song, but ur poem is even better lyl! ttyl! -xoxo- stina

That was so...GOOD!!!!!!! It's exactly how I feel sometimes too. You're so good at expressing yourself!!!!!

*sniffle* i hope u dont really think that way of ur self. in my opinion, u deserve better, not him. keep writin im out

*sobbing hysterically* that was so good...*sniff*...don't be so harsh on yourself either...*bawling* really goooooood!

N'importe ce que, je serai toujours là pour vous. Je sais que vous savez cela, votre une fille futée. Je suis l'énonciation juste....I'll sois toujours ici.

heh good french......i hope......

I dont have the time to read it but i will read later....3 minutes left in computers...lisa says hi and amanda is talking to todd cohen...brendon was making sex sounds in the back of the classroom...i was a bit disturbed...and yet aroused...haha, jk...alright im out, bells gonna ring, adios!I'll leave a review for this poem in another thing, k? bye!

i'm feeling da pain in my

redundant or not i LOVED it. really illustrates the feelings i have sometimes lol.

Hiya, Midight. Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your other stuff lately. I really like that way that you say everything that you want to say, but I think you could send this poem in a more definite direction. Do you fell that the dude is hurting the girl by loving her, or is he being kindly in a way that others have not? It seems like you want to portray what is going on with your friend, but it isn't necesary to say everything, especially if it doesn't back up your point. The whole "true beauty" thing endears me to the dude, but if he's just lying because he's trying to get some, then you should make that more evident. Does the girl want to be loved; does she feel she deserves better?

Hi. Yeah. Copyright enfringements, dear.

i say it sounds like he's trying to play you. i think that you should tell him that you'd rather be friends for a little while and then see how he reacts to it.

Ack, you poor thing...*** liking you...*shakes head* great poem