Reviews for Fractured: A Happy Poem

Reviews For: Fractured: A Happy Poem

Lady Katreina 2007-06-09 ch 1,	abuseAnd I did enjoy. Your insides are interesting. Run I would. Shaw. Good work. I like how this came of writing something happy. Your Poems give a person a lot to think about. Thank you for it.
revealed 2005-03-07 ch 1,	abuseIt's funny when people ask to "know you". They only want to know that there's some happiness in there somewhere, they don't really want to see all the darkness and the thoughts running through your brain. If people knew what everyone else was really thinking, no one would be happy, no one wants to know reality. Anyways, not really a review, but the thoughts your poem brought. It was a great one, as all of them are.
Shinatoa 2004-11-18 ch 1,	abusei hate it when people want to 'know what's inside', because they always ask when your at the bottom of your moods. i knocked a psychiatrist(or whatever they are) out once for asking me that. i mean for hell's sake, i was sitting there with a safty pin poking it through my wrist! i'm not feeling good, especially not when my conscience hasn't shut it goddamn mouth. for more on that comment, go read my story KutStains.
Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1,	abuseYou can't take the angst out of the girl(um...I hope this assumption is correct...if not, sorry)! For some reason, I laughed when I finished reading. Can't exactly explain...I guess it just seems a bit ironic. Anyways, love your poem. Going to review the others. Angst rules.
faithinfate 2004-04-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseits beautiful. it doesnt matter that it isnt a "happy poem", only that it came from your heart. please do not change it, it is beautiful.
little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1,	abusethey picked the wrong time to 'know' you.god I hate when ppl want to 'know you'
Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE it(i know my reviews must be getting boring, but I really do love them all)
scarred 2002-12-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was really amazing. I don't want people to see the real me either because I know that if they see the real me and all of my pain I will only end up hurting them as well. I like the last 3 lines the best. That's what I want to tell everyone who wants to "know me". Poems are really what you are feeling and if you aren't feeling completely happy then it will be hard to write a completely happy poem. But I loves this one. Good job and keep writing these amazing things!
Black Dragon4 2002-05-19 ch 1,	abuseit's happy, i like. Another picture i am tingking.
Goosie Gal 2002-03-24 ch 1,	abusenice...you've got really good description...wow...yeah..i think that angsty poems are the best... i can only write poetry when im depressed... i can't write poetry when i am happy... it's sorta kinda weird.. oh well!..but i wanna congratulate you on a nicely written poem...hope you feel betta soon!
yomama cakes 2002-03-16 ch 1,	abuseA great poem, really.
Sarah aka DEVI 2002-03-13 ch 1,	abuseIt's nice to know I'm not the only one that feels this way............
Ragdoll 2002-02-25 ch 1,	abuseIf you're hapy, write happy. If you're sad, write sad. I like this poem.. it's really descriptive and brutal. The short lines in between the long break it up nicely. There's something really pretty about a poem like this, even though on the surface it just seems depressed and "messed up". I suppose it's pretty to me because it doesn't matter if we don't think or act like other people because we can identify with each other and love each other's dark sides... So in a way maybe it is a happy poem ;)
allie cole 2002-02-14 ch 1,	abuseGood stuff. The title alluded me a litle bit, I thought it was going to be literally a happy poem... I still like the style, I think angst poems hold the most emotion and meaning, and this has both of those. I like it, truly. -ac-

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