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| Googlepuss 2005-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was good. It was beautifully set up, and you created great empathy for that characters from the start. Well done! |
| Dark Jester1 2002-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! Great job on the descriptions! The introduction was perfect, and pulled me right into the story. I love the concept of this Amazon-type society you have going. Very intriguing. I love that the characters are fleshed out right from the start, already building in personality and obvious views. Some people have a hard time getting characters to seem real. I was upset that Elanor died, because you'd already made me like her. :) Keep it up! |