i like how you write.. its easy to relate to.. ok then..

Hey! You're poem really stuck out to me, because i see so much of myself in you. I too get this crap and misunderstanding for being a goth all of the time...and I am also a writer for Chicken Soup for the Soul, PUSH, etc. It's be nice to meet you. My sn is SnOwBuNNY978. IM me sometime! Great poem, by the way!

I could relate to a lot of the things you were saying in that poem, and I like how you worded those emotions down so well. Great work!

ooo mesa like. i believe a lot of ppl think like this, me including. maybe if i wrote more i wouldnt take out my anger on my body

Wow this is good. I don't have it as tough as you though my GRANDPARENTS think that my gothic make up isn't that bad. But complain about me being too boyish. "You're a girl not a boy you're not suppose to have a messy room, jump around, speak whatever you think ect." It just gets us into long pointless arguments. Anyway ignore the ramble. Nice poem. Very expressive. Go girl.

I loved that. It was nicely written and I can relate to it..too much actually. bwit xx

I like this. Goth and Poet is a good combo. That's kind of what Edgar Allan Poe was, right?

God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze

- Kacie

... you sound just like me. Thats what they all tell me every day. I like the way I am, but I am supposed to change for the "Better People". I love to write poems also. I hope to read more of your work.

deep. i loved it. And if it was ok with you i wanted to read this to my Creative Writeings class. of course the creadit will go to you we just have to read it out loud and discuss it in class. please post a review on one of my works telling me what you think cause i cant get Email. (cheep computer)
**i know what you mean with the whole goth/poet statement. works for me to. >:)

Ah...how true...how true... I will not say "I feel your pain", because I'm sure, though our pain is very much the same, it is very different.
It is absolutely beautiful, however.

Dark Delights,
Ryu

Wow jessica that was really good. I liked it!!

This is really good! Keep shutting out the lies! ^_~

DAMN RIGHT! same with me, flip pepople and what they say who cares? I dont give a f*** i dont see why ppl do, in the end their the losers, ignore them be whoever you wanna be, just be u though. sos

hey, i liked that a lot. :D

Very good... I can sympathize with this. At my school we're supposed to be all perky, and I'm, like, the only depressed, slightly gothic person there... which is why it's so much fun to scare everyone there. ^_~ Love it!