On the first reading it doesn't sound like you were mentioning anything devine. It's an insightful poem.

"your oxymorons inspire hope" i love that.

"creates a tone too much like suicide. "
Brilliant. No energy to get specific here, I'm half alseep.

What can I say? This poem speaks from the heart, to the heart. Everyone feels this way, sometime...we just all need to know that there is no perfection in life. In the world, even.
Beautiful. This was absolutely beautiful. I do hopw you keep writing.

I have a poem with the same name, except yours clearly over shadows mine. I feel like hiding in a corner and crying because your poem is better, and so is your use of words. Turned me into a fan!

i liked this and by the way everyone feels like they have failed at being a good person.

I liked your poem