The first four chapters reminded me of Vivian Vande Velde's novel "Dragon's Bait" even up to the father! But it's all probably coincidence and the fifth chapter definitely goes away from that novel.

Draco sounds really cool!

Why haven't you continued writing the story? I wanna read more. *whines and paws at knee*

V_V why arent there any updates? I really want to read more. but its been what? five years?? >_

im on this chapter. ill finish up tomorrow. well.. in a few hours when i wake up okay? :D

hmm.

MUST HAVE MORE! *big crazy eyes* MORE I SAY!

After over a year of trying, I was finally able to get a copy of „Dragon’s Bait” and I must say that, your story is MUCH better.

wow, looks good so far. just remember to write in the same tense (past tense, present tense, etc).

Great story. You really should keep writing. I like this one, and it is very entertaining. What will Draco do to Morgan when he finds her? He can't be knocked out of the story just yet, and PI think that he'll come back.
Later,
K.S. Night

Good story so far. I like this so much! You're good!
Morgan is very angry, no? I think that I should start learning to aim so I can throw things and hit them too. I am learning to throw knives and hatchets, and I can shoot a bow, but I suck at it.
Later,
K.S. Night

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! This is funny! I don't think that I've ever laughed so hard at someting like this. Morgan is sassy! That makes her funny and I like funny things!
Later,
K.S. Night

HAHAHAHAHA! This story is good! I like that Morgan is such a fighter. I don'y like wimpy heroiens (did I spell that right?) and every girl should know how to throw a decent punch.
Anyhoo, this is good. I hope you continue to write more stories and novels as good as this one.
Later,
K.S. Night

Woa, this is one of the best orignal stories ive ever read, no joke, im in awe at your writing skills, ive seen your anime fanfic's (Ore-sama is great) but this is just wow,

Yeah!!!! You finally added a new chapter. This is a very good story and I hope you finish it soon without rushing that is. I love this story and I want to know what happens. Keep 'em coming and don't get discouraged if you get writers block or something like that. :)

POST MORE OFTEN PLEASE i need to knooow what happens