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linder leee!! 2006-07-11 . chapter 31
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ew how old was the DM? ew! i hope hes at least under 40. an old man stalking a young girl... ew.
a.small.town.bear 2005-08-09 . chapter 28
Gah! Who is he?!
a.small.town.bear 2005-08-08 . chapter 10
HeeHee! I thought you would have to type your essays with all these different types of formats and stuff cuz that's how it usually is, but whatever, can't wait to see what happens next!
a.small.town.bear 2005-08-08 . chapter 8
Man, this is too funny! Keep it up!
a.small.town.bear 2005-08-08 . chapter 7
This was a good chapter! Yay! But, do colleges have detention?
instant noodle 2004-12-23 . chapter 31
ur stories rock!i just luv dem!
Leila 2004-10-15 . chapter 9
LOL RAFL OMG *dies of laughter* I love your story so far! It's super funny! I would say that hal...ious? word, but my english is not good enough! >.
fallen-shinobi 2004-09-21 . chapter 20
hohhoo~~ poor kevin~
fallen-shinobi 2004-09-21 . chapter 19
wo~~ i want to have a cool mum like electra~ ^.^
fallen-shinobi 2004-09-21 . chapter 9
wahahha~~ i like your humor~ ^.^x
fallen-shinobi 2004-09-21 . chapter 4
heheheh~~ beauty slep~
The UGLY American 2004-07-27 . chapter 31
amusing.
ola 2004-01-06 . chapter 31
told you i'd read the next part too! i fell asleep just efore the last chapter, damn it. *sigh* lol. got to love all your characters. even josh isn't so bad once you get to know him ,eh? lol. on to story number three!! =)
sinfool 2003-08-09 . chapter 19
O_O Oh~ Lovely!
MimiGhost 2003-04-25 . chapter 31
cute, update soon...er no start on Phase 3 soon.
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