i like. =)

great poem! good choice of words

it sort of made sense. this is a stupid ques, but y did u use whit, black, and yellow? i dont no exactly wat u did or how u did it, but u made the rhythm of the poem really enjoyable. keep ritin!

We's yello ppl! Hehehe. Great poem! Very true: just colors! But you know...some stubborn jackasses insist on saying that there's a difference.

*gapes* this is great, stact! anyways, it makes perfect sense to me...maybe cuz I'm strange...but it's great!! I especially love the "Who drew the line" part...

oooooooh, nice poem... i understand this, dont worry :P hehehe, poems r just for expression, they dont always have to make sense to others as long as it makes sense to u
keep writing!!!

This is a really well written poem. Don't ever be afraid if people won't understand your writing, because thats what [petry is all about! i know understand exactally what your talking about here. i get predjudice everyday, because i'm gothic. Not many people actually take the time to get to know me and see that i'm not who they are stereotyping. Anyways, i love this. Keep writing, your really good.