Very good but... Isn't there any more?
Anyways, please R+R my stories.
Keep up the good writing!
Delta Writer

Very well writtin! I like this. The description of the cell and wounds and such are very interesting. I've been reading a lot of stories that involve people in torture cells recently, lol.

This is fantastic Kristi! I wish I could have written it myself! I can't believe how much description and emotion you squeezed into 500 words! The last paragraph is heart wrenching!

*blinks*

Okay, ya know, unlike mine, you had a...well, KIND OF 'happy' ending? With the flower and him welcoming death knowing he would not give his secret to those who tried to claim it, no matter what they did to him. He kept his pride.

I really liked this and thank you for mentioning it in your review that you did for 'Tortured Agony'. In this, you did have wonderful descriptions, espeically with the steel bars and the pain the ropes were causing to his skin. *Wrinkles her nose* Ouch... Also, I liked the simile (did I spell that write?) that you used to compare his captors eyes to the steel bars. Very nice touch.

Anyway, again, I enjoyed this. You kind of brought life to your character at the end with him dying but having the knowledge that he would die keeping what she would not speak aloud. Great job and thank you for your review!

Very good. I liked it a lot.

that was very good. probably could have expanded on it so the reader would become attached to Garrett and the simplicity of the ending would have been much more appreciated. i'm not putting it down. no, no of course not. just offering constructive criticism. it was very good; as they say "short, sweet, and to the point"

wow... this was just great! it was sad... but like everybody else is saying, there was hope in it! it was very interesting and it leaves room for more, but of course it's fine the way it is. and i think that that is a very possible future, considering our past... and human nature.

oh! how sad! is ther going to be more? explain what is happening? make a happy ending? please? thjat makes me wanna cry. The ending sucked.

That was an inspiring story and i really liked the part about the flower! it almost made me want to cry!

It was smart. It showed this mans overwhleming character. You could write more of this, or leave it as is.

whoa.....that was just....*speechless*.......I'm speechless....this is so fantasticly great!! It's sad...but it gives a sence of hope...I like that in a story...well done