Dude. that was hella intense. i loved the story a lot. i think you are very talented: the way you described everything, setting the depressing and sad mood with metaphors. i am gonna get some of my friends to read this from school.i enjoyed this story.

-Luke

Hey, this is really good! I like it! The main character is a lot like me, which scares me a little...anyways, you got a lot of talent!

Man, don't you just hate those little one-phrase reviews? ^^; But I really did liek this. This is one of those stories that I lieked so much, in fact, that I kept inserting my own charas into it (even if it didn't work, because, well... they're the psychos and I, for some reason or another, refused to insert them as the narrator). Did he ever have a name? ^^; I know this is a little one-shotter, but because of my habit of turning small one-shotters into long life-stories, I do wish the story had lasted a bit longer. Perhaps a little more anguish? ^^; Ehh, don't mind my obsessions for the pain of fictional characters...

~Rura

I liked it alot

That..that was beautiful..

It was creepy. I liked it though.

*tear* wow! that was good!

Wow... that was amazing... holy crap... *tear*

Good story

I can relate to that only I just cut all of the guys nuts of

hm again a good story .. and thanks for your review it was nifty

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