It's soothing and the rhyming is different than from what I normally read...

LOVED it! ;(

*~*SMILE*~* :Þ

Hiya. This is Hybrid Angel from SP. Anyway, Twish gave me your penname and I decided to check out your stuff. This poem caught my eye cuz I also lost a close friend. And I must say, oit struck a nerve. Cuttos to a great poem. ^.~
-Jay-^^'

my condolences.

This was a really good poem. Keep up the good work.

bittersweet and touching plus you managed to rhyme it nicely.Wonderful job!

Hey there ~*Billy Zane's Girl*~

It must have been so hard to wirite this, but at the same time, relieving.

You should be proud, and ignore the annonymous person who flames you without constructive criticism. He/she was too cowardly to even admit who they were.

I agree, and believe that your friend would be so honoured to have a poem dedicated to his life. Beautiful and sweet.

Love, bruises, glitter and scars,
~*Scarie Faerie*~
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Loosing a friend is always hard. I'm sure he'd be honored you wrote such a heartfelt poem about him.

Um, that was really CORNY!

sorry about ur friend he sounded great and i'm sure u'll see him again one
day