wow, that was really good. I love it. You should update it, keep writing. It's great!

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hmm now that was interesting....

Good story. Unfortunately, it's all too true that people will do almost anything when they're desperate enough, including destroying their chances in life. And from the report at the end, it sounds like there’s still $30, 000 hiding under the floorboards in that house..hmm…lol ;)

That was ok. If all yours are about death and murder why do you diss my story?

hmm....nifty story

Hm...short and sweet. I like it, though it is quite short.