That was a very cool story. Go Krista! Lol.

Wow! Definitely not what I expected.
This is a very good story, quite dramatic and very sad.
I'd like to say something else but I just hit a block.

I thought it was a good story, seemed a little short, even if it started as a school project- you could always continue the idea.

Hello stange story Kris. Oh well. Are u going to write anymore story's. If u do can u email me. My email is in my profile. k bye =)

Woah! Creepy!

Heyo... this is mudgurl647 and thanxz SO much for reviewing!

I love your story by the way- maybe you could write a short prequel or something, telling how Josh was driven to attempt to murder his gurl and himself; who she flirted with and stuff! It'd be cool. :)

So...cya,

Mudgurl647

Oh my god! That was amazing! I told you you should be an author. You had me on the edge of
my seat the whole time! c-ya thursday