How cool a story was that! Nice job! Splendid! Superb!

hum interesting!

I love this story! Half the time I kept on thinking that I was watching a movie or something like that lol Anyway Hope you write other grate storys like this one.

ok sati, i read the whole thing and liked it alot. though the main charectors reminded me of some people i know. the whole story flowed nicly and there were very few rough spots. thanks for the story and letting me read it.

ok, im all for the i love u lets make love thjing, but in her parents house? thats just...ew

*twitch**twitch* AHHHHHHH! RUN AWAY RUNAWAY! hehehe theres worse on cable! dragon lords idea was stupid in my opion, but hey *shrug* made the story funner!

this story had such a happy ending and i loved it a lot and i am glad that no one got hurt, that's a good sign!

who is xaria this is still confusing yet still a very happy ending!

this is soooooo weird and i can't wait to read on i am toooo ezcited for my own good! haaaaahahahhaha...

have you considered turning this into a book? it is really good!

this is a good chapter but why won't he tell her what he knows and why do you keep your readers in suspense?

this is an interesting chapter and i am pleased that you had another dragon there toooo it makes things very interesting.

i am sure that her dreams are of visions that will happen...

that is sooo sweet they are getting to be a cute couple and that dragon meeting sounds interesting.

well i'm glad everything went smoothly in this chapter but know what else is going to happen for you to write about?