Yay! Please write more! Your story is so good! Can't wait to read more, till then, bye! _

Wow! I really like this story, and I like how you don't feel the need to rush it

and finish it so fast. :-) I like the details you pay attention to, like the dandolion...

Hehe, just the point of view of an artist! :-p Thanks for writing such a great story and I hope

you keep up with it!

Very interesting. I adore the ideas and the characters seem mostly lifelike...though I think the mother would be more involved in Aeslynn's life. Aeslynn seems a little too perfect, on occasion. You could have brought in the 35 feet thing when she was drawing him or when you were discribing the dream with the 3 blue dragons. At least I think you could have. Anyways, very interesting, keep writing please.

AHHHH! Why is there not more? *sniff* I need to know what happens next! Please? I am sad. This story is very enthralling and I couldn't "put it down". I can't wait for you to write more.

Oh, my goodness! If she doesn't end up with Lonryo, I will be upset! You are doing such a good job keeping your readers interested. I love your story!

oh my.. looks like you've gotten yourself another loyal reader! (i'm sure you don't mind though)... this story is excellent! I like Teague a lot but Dragons have always interest me and Lonryo... well he's just too cool! as of now i'm still confused about Aeslynn and her connection with Lonryo.. but i'll just read and see what's up... it's funny to think that Lonryo would court Aeslynn.. hmm.. he'd have some competition from Teague.. and just who is Lord Teague? so many questions! please have more chapters soon!

really interesting! please continue! *reads it all over again*

THIS IS GOOOOOOD!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww poor Lonryo. I wish he could have just told Aeslyn about what he thought of her. What's with "he wanted to tell her *he* wanted her..."? The *he* part...hmmmm...very cryptic there. Are you implying something? heheh... OK keep up or else...(just kidding).

Uh oh Lonryo saw her naked! hEHE! You're keeping us in suspense if you don't hurry up and tell us if there's a connection between Lonryo and Lord Teague.

omg! I love your story! it is so original! You have a real tallent for writing and I really look forward to your next chapter! please keep writing! _

Hey...would u happen to have a picture of Teague or Lonryo would u? If you do, can you send them to either or thanx!

Hey that was SOOO good! I mean, usually I'm into Harry Potter, and it's hard to find a good story. I've read a couple of really good fantasy stories, including yours. Authors who write fantasy (like you) have to be creative. They have to have an active imagination, and be able to put it down on paper. Please continue this story, you have a lot of talent, and a lot of potential left over!

Very nicely written.. I'm liking it.. but the chapters are sooo short ;)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooooooooo sweet! Lord Teague has a thing for Aeslyn...hehehe. Men I can't wait 'till she turns 15! That lord Teague seems pretty patient and I can't believe Aeslyn actually flirted...hehe. That was unexpected but it fit so much with them almost kissing! That elf had to interrupt them...oh well. PLease more! I wonder what Lord Lonryo's part now...