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| Valaraiya 2005-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, typo! Unless with a C,it's always I before E.*Poor 'diety' Christ. *...except in 'deity' and 'weird' and a few other exceptions... |
| subhumans8 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abusewhat the ** you **, california is nothing like that, obviously you live in cali and wenrt born there or your just some pathetic retard trying to put other poeople dreams down...** |
| Katterree Fengari 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abuseOoo...Sweet poem! tis funny...Nice ending.. ....sadly...I don't belond in California....but I think I live there....SC-Southern California.......but that's jus what somebody told me...um....right.. Nice poem |
| L0ser Punk 2002-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHey! What's wrong with Southern California? I live there and I wouldn't want to live anywhere else! ^_^ Nice weather, Awesome bands.... Are you from California? We're not all blonde (I'm a brunette). Just a stereotypical thing. Lol. This is funny though. It's fun to see what people think of us Californians. Lol. Please write more! |
| Vampire-Queen 2002-03-21 ch 1, | abuseWell, just to tell you, we arn't all that bad! I mean, sure some of us are, but not all of us are! What state did you come from, Kansas? Well Dorthy, get with the program, and vist California, and you will see that not everyone is like your Aunty May! |
| BeautifulWickedness 2002-02-21 ch 1, | abuseHehe. That was good! Thanks for reviewing my stuff. I think you got California and hell mixed up, though... |
| aNGeLz3x*prOtOn 2002-02-15 ch 1, | abuseits true... its true... your poems are almost as good as your haiku! haha... |
| Meegwun 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abusehmmm... or maybe the ignorant corporate bastards will wreck the earth and melt the icecaps first. then California would SINK. Heh. People who THINK And scoff at ignorance And don't obsess about syllable counts You belong in Canada. Oh HKP, HKP, i tease you, but you know i appreciate your work. :) |
| Nerilka-chan 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseT.T waaaaaaaaaah *crys* i dunt wanna be all alone! ~_^ ~N-chan |
| toyouke 2002-02-11 ch 1, | abuseHey! Not all of California is bad and scary. Just the southern portion. Which will break off in an earthquake and fall in a hole. So there's no problem. |
| BrideOnFire 2002-02-11 ch 1, | abuseHehe..i love your poem! And not just cuz i live in California and thinks that Cali owns all...Usually people right about love and how much their lives suck; it's nice to see something so original being written. Oh, and BTW, i LOVE your SN LoL. |
| Wan 2002-02-11 ch 1, | abusethis is so COOL! and i thought u only wrote haikus... |
| Aetre (from New England) 2002-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha! Yes, this is so true. Sometimes I'm glad there's a place on earth where those California people can keep to themselves. |