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FictionPressPenName
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseLol! Very funny! Can't think of anything wrong with it.
RosepetalDoll
2005-06-13
ch 1,
abuse"wish i had a coat"...you are awosome. yr poems rock! excuse me i meant haikus!~rosie
Wooffles
2003-06-17
ch 1,
abuseOk...
Cranky Cathe
2002-08-05
ch 1,
abuseimma gonna counter ure haiku with my own

rain brings out tha snails
and then when the snails breathe out...
wow! pretty bubbles
Aesthete
2002-07-27
ch 1,
abuseHeh...heh...that was funny..
Kewie
2002-03-08
ch 1,
abuseHere's a thought. Maybe the water will bring the life back to your brain. ^_^
Staci Kaufmann
2002-03-06
ch 1,
abuse*g* Like your stuff! Funny haiku rule... :-)
~*GypsyQueen*~
2002-03-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseBreathtaking dear hearts,
But why waste a good down pour,
On plastic death traps?

So I find rain euphoric... *sticks out tongue* You other chicks out there can have your chocolate and oysters. Give me a good storm any day of the week! *starts to get huffy and 'storms' off*
BeautifulWickedness
2002-02-27
ch 1,
abuseHaha! Very good! *grin*
Angelicpixie
2002-02-22
ch 1,
abuseCute poem, I hardly ever have time to review anyones poem... I hope you dont flame me on my stuff.. wonders.... yes i do spell things wrong just to far warn you... bu i think you guys have some great talent. You're right but do listen to both stories instead of your own..
Wan
2002-02-13
ch 1,
abusegood one.
Meegwun
2002-02-12
ch 1,
abuseliteral image
Haikus can be abstract too
wish i had an axe...

Kidding, kidding. Good.
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