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| Orphans' Wail 2005-01-06 ch 1,  | abusenot bad, could use a little more thought. Your style is really fluid, but not suited for haikus. |
| GameFreak7744 2003-10-02 ch 1, | abusewoo-hoo erosion kinda spoils it, but its good anyway, i like it. can you please delete that anon who said yawn, but really long? its so annoying. Also could you please R&R my stories? |
| seashell 2003-01-26 ch 1, | abuseWater is much better than that! Water is beautyful! water is life! Water is everywhere! respect the water. |
| soyamiso 2002-11-01 ch 1, | abusethe first two lines are always so great...then you kill me...with laughter. |
| Mind of a Child 2002-06-09 ch 1, | abuseLOL. |
| LunarBard 2002-03-27 ch 1, | abuseNow that was good. It made me chuckle- lot better than some of the more serious haikus i've seen |
| i hate my boyfriend 2002-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abusehahahahaha....that was funny......i think u people might have some psychological issues tho. |
| americananime 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuseYOU PEOPLE ARE DRIVING ME OUT OF MY SKULL! My poor best friend is here (actually, it's her house...) watching me flame as fast as I can, and hiding her face in her hands... when they're not clapping. The last lines always ruin yours! Gah! i'm going to watch Tombstone again. |
| Zemmiphobic 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuselol that is hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol i love it |
| SERVES YOU RIGHT! 2002-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Moonie Pie 2002-02-26 ch 1, | abusehahahahaha go, police, go! |
| Angelicpixie 2002-02-22 ch 1, | abuseyes water could be dangerouse, but also it calms our soul... |
| Daughter of the Nile 2002-02-15 ch 1, | abuseL?INSM! ~Daughter of the Nile~ |
| EmptyStages 2002-02-14 ch 1, | abusehaha |
| Meegwun 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuse*falls over* whooooo...... was that supposed to be funny? because it was. Extremely. :) |