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Reviews For: Water

Orphans' Wail
2005-01-06
ch 1,
abusenot bad, could use a little more thought. Your style is really fluid, but not suited for haikus.
GameFreak7744
2003-10-02
ch 1,
abusewoo-hoo erosion kinda spoils it, but its good anyway, i like it.
can you please delete that anon who said yawn, but really long? its so annoying.
Also could you please R&R my stories?
seashell
2003-01-26
ch 1,
abuseWater is much better than that! Water is beautyful! water is life! Water is everywhere! respect the water.
soyamiso
2002-11-01
ch 1,
abusethe first two lines are always so great...then you kill me...with laughter.
Mind of a Child
2002-06-09
ch 1,
abuseLOL.
LunarBard
2002-03-27
ch 1,
abuseNow that was good. It made me chuckle- lot better than some of the more serious haikus i've seen
i hate my boyfriend
2002-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abusehahahahaha....that was funny......i think u people might have some psychological issues tho.
americananime
2002-03-08
ch 1,
abuseYOU PEOPLE ARE DRIVING ME OUT OF MY SKULL! My poor best friend is here (actually, it's her house...) watching me flame as fast as I can, and hiding her face in her hands... when they're not clapping. The last lines always ruin yours! Gah! i'm going to watch Tombstone again.
Zemmiphobic
2002-03-08
ch 1,
abuselol that is hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol i love it
SERVES YOU RIGHT!
2002-03-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!
Moonie Pie
2002-02-26
ch 1,
abusehahahahaha

go, police, go!
Angelicpixie
2002-02-22
ch 1,
abuseyes water could be dangerouse, but also it calms our soul...
Daughter of the Nile
2002-02-15
ch 1,
abuseL?INSM!

~Daughter of the Nile~
EmptyStages
2002-02-14
ch 1,
abusehaha
Meegwun
2002-02-12
ch 1,
abuse*falls over* whooooo...... was that supposed to be funny? because it was. Extremely. :)
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