Love your poetry. You know exactly where to place everything, every punctuation mark and where to omit them, which word to choose... It's wonderful. I adore it. Especially the last bit (I always seem to have favorite parts, don't I? LOL), about the paragraph breaks.
And this is a bit of a random note, but have you read Neruda's "The Word" before? Not an enourmous fan of old Pabby, but "The Word" is gorgeous. :) I'm quite strange...
Anyway, have a briliant holiday!
regards,
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Un-freakin'-believable!! How do you do this? This is everything I've ever thought about my ow characters, but put a heck of a lot more eloquently! Fantastic.

Hey wow! This was really good!

i have alrady stated my opinion on this poem, but i'll give it to you again: beautiful. the rest is in the e-mail i sent you about 3 weeks ago. farewell...
blue skies

interesting, the idea they may have free will. great analogy in there as well.