So...I'm about ready to guess that you're from the uk, just because of your knowledge (or ability to convincingly make up) of street names and using the word jumper...

Anyway, I wish I could write a review that would appropriately convey my appreciation and love for this story, but I don't have half so many good words as you do.

I hope to see much more of this.

Very thought-provoking. Like the language in it.

I'm glad to hear that you're a banana. ^_^

TST

The descriptions. The plot. The writing in general. It’s beautiful! I am really interested to see where this takes you. More ?

I can't say I despise this because it was enjoyable and well written. However, I feel it rather disonorable to Michael to say he would do such a thing as disagree with God. Excellent work, though.

you know, you have a knack for somehow choosing the right words. interesting.. hm.. out of the ordinary, most definitely. =)
anyway.. i was just wondering (ayte maybe not 'just'.. i [i]have been[/i] wondering for quite awhile, lol) if you just well, [i]happen[/i] to have 'to wear the captain's armband' still.. and if you'd be so kind as to let me read it one last time.. =( please =D? i'm sure many people've said this but honestly, it's my favourite story in the entire of ff.net! wowee! can you imagine that?! lol.. naw, seriously now. noo i'm not some sick gay pervert or whatever but really, i'm not very emotional and well, i believe very much in that story (which is probably why they disallow real-people fics nowadays). imagine the SHOCK i had when, after a nice long holiday from ff.net, found out that my favourite-est story was DELETED! *GASP*. pffff. with 64 days to christmas would you please be so kind as to bring a smile to this lonely person? lol.. =) i'll check back in awhile (or you could email me) and maybe we could strike a deal, yeh? thanks mate.

*sniffle* That was beatiful. And Good Omen's is such a good book (Aziraphale an' Crowley, *woot*) Michael's...not perfect. 's nice. But I agree with Michael. Paradise Lost is one of my favorite books. Oh, and the Jazz thing, have you seen 'My Life So Far'? Someone makes a similar comparison in that

Oh. It's beautiful. I love the door. And the comment about jazz (even though I am not a jazz fan myself). Detail! Angels! More?

Well feck me that was wicked! Nice one! Is there going to be more of this story? Doesn't matter if there isn't because it stands well on it's own, but it would be great if you wrote more! hehe! *hint hint!* anyway, fantastic story darling! falling angels forever, even though Michael says he's not fallen, and may the Force be with you.

that was stunning, really stunning.... you leave me (almost) speechless. you have the incredible gift of being able to make people believe that you have seen this happen, that you were there watching it, and knew exactly what they were thinking. your writing is elegant and flows beautifully, and your story is simple but effective. your description of london is spot on, and the little details, like the taste of the coke and ring on his finger, add something special to it. you've fired me up a bit, i feel like writing now.... but that was gorgeous. and randomly very different to sorcery - the style is totally different. both are perfect for sating my need for something good to read. *sigh* thank you! i love you!
blue skies.....

[big grin]
You know I love this. And you. And Michael. And the teddy bear.

Dammit. Not another WIP... And what a brilliant WIP it is, too. I love how you captured Michael's naivety as he looked at the flashing ads in Piccadilly Circus - this piece was really full of that sort of vivid snapshot, all of which give the fic so much depth and character. Your writing style here is great, the letters made my breath catch and... well, dammit - more? Please? Now?

I like this! I love stories that have to do with the bible or biblical characters. I'm writting one myself about the Archangel Michael. Check out sometime....please. It's called 'Tears of Blood.' Keep this up!