Asuka, that was awesome. there was so much feeling in there and you used the best wording to get the meanings out in the right way. i look forward to more! ^^
xoxox!
Bunny

Just a small thing in the bottom of your third paragraph the word the is spelled "teh". ^_^.

Shes an angry little girl isn't she.

I am happy to say I have reveiwed and read all of your fics ^_^

Nothing like a nice story between a loving father and a loyal daughter to brighten up my day. Oh wait...this is the opposite. Hehe. I liked it. The daughters character change was very clear despite the brevity of the passage. I think the scene of her actually stitching up her father would be beautiful. Please write it.

Oooh, very nice.. Very nice indeed! Lots of powerful feeling in there, and easy to read. Great work Asuka, please write more...
Whoo! You get the Golden Jellybean award...
Er, problem is... it only exists in my imagination...
Heheh, you go girl!
-Mish

Marvelous! Bravo! Though this is only a portion of a larger piece, I must say that I like the whole thing already. Is there any way you could send whatever else you have completed on it to me? You've caught my imagination as well as my curiosity and writer's eye. I promise not to steal your material. :) Girl scout honor. *Hold up three fingers* VERY nicely done.

~Iris Dedrick~