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| Reviews for Operation Cross Dress |
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  Guest 11/22/10 . chapter 7 okay, i can't read anymore. it's a wonderful plot line, i love it, but your grammar is horrendus, you format is more like text messages or im'ing, and you don't have nearly enough description. wish i could go on, but i can't. |
| sigh 11/22/10 . chapter 2 It's called grammar. Write it down! and then spell check it! |
 Blood Zephyr 2/19/10 . chapter 1-.- Good grief... MSN lingo in a STORY? Are you freaking kidding me? You obviously have no respect for the English language... |
| kiiwii short cake 11/18/06 . chapter 25 naah you shouldnt make another story or something like part 2-B or something.. it would just ruin the mood.. i rlly like this storyy it rocks my sox off! anywho its really cute. and i cant wait to see how you make rika fall for lucky.. i mean of course they are gonna end up together right? OMFG .. and before this chappie i thought the villain person was yukora-or sumthin or the other ..waht was her name again?- that was after rika and was sending those threats... gues not .. OR? okai ne whoo -once again- buhbye -x0x- Keysha. |
| Huloptis 7/28/06 . chapter 3 Slakers unite*shakes head*. I love this story hehe and it makes sense with touches of happiness all in one. It's A-ok-! I also ove the parody, bye! |
| Sally-andersonn 10/25/05 . chapter 4 The chapter name doesn't fit. He just complained but did not fight. |
| Sally-andersonn 10/25/05 . chapter 3 Seems kinda forced to me. I know that the main character will happily follow the orders and everything happens happilly ever after while the main character is happily repressed and silent. I hope you are good at writing. Funky characters too. |
| Sica 9/20/05 . chapter 25 My god. when are you gonna update? Its been what? two years? lol. I'm guessing We'll never know what well. |
| Sally-andersonn 8/18/05 . chapter 2 Your style of writing can be confusing at times but is different and very funky. |
| Sally-andersonn 8/18/05 . chapter 1 hello! very fast-paced. though i am hoping the next chapterw ould be more explanatory. |
| amethystdawn 1/28/05 . chapter 12 CLiffhanger! argh! |
| amethystdawn 1/28/05 . chapter 11 You are such a genuis... I don't know how you can churn out so many fantastic chapters... |
| amethystdawn 1/28/05 . chapter 10 for once, flaming hair can be a good thing... |
| amethystdawn 1/28/05 . chapter 9 I decided to place two reviews in one: teacherXprincipal? This is even better than the lesbian teacher (Well we think she is after hearing rumors of her touching people's boobies...) at school. Chapter 9's not that funny, but it's still great! Keep writing! |
| amethystdawn 1/28/05 . chapter 6 School does suck... BTW, do you have any she-man gaurds/teachers in here? |
