   kiiwii short cake 2006-11-18 . chapter 25naah you shouldnt make another story or something like part 2-B or something.. it would just ruin the mood.. i rlly like this storyy it rocks my sox off! anywho
its really cute. and i cant wait to see how you make rika fall for lucky.. i mean of course they are gonna end up together right?!! OMFG .. and before this chappie i thought the villain person was yukora-or sumthin or the other ..waht was her name again?- that was after rika and was sending those threats... gues not .. OR? okai ne whoo -once again-
buhbye -x0x-
~Keysha. |
 Huloptis 2006-07-28 . chapter 3 Slakers unite*shakes head*. I love this story hehe and it makes sense with touches of happiness all in one. It's A-ok^-^! I also ove the parody, bye! |
 Sally-andersonn 2005-10-25 . chapter 4The chapter name doesn't fit. He just complained but did not fight. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-25 . chapter 3 Seems kinda forced to me. I know that the main character will happily follow the orders and everything happens happilly ever after while the main character is happily repressed and silent. I hope you are good at writing. Funky characters too. |
 Sica 2005-09-20 . chapter 25My god. when are you gonna update? Its been what? two years? lol. I'm guessing We'll never know what happens.Oh well. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-08-18 . chapter 2 Your style of writing can be confusing at times but is different and very funky. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-08-18 . chapter 1 hello! very fast-paced. though i am hoping the next chapterw ould be more explanatory. |
 amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 12CLiffhanger! argh! |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 11 You are such a genuis... I don't know how you can churn out so many fantastic chapters... |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 10 for once, flaming hair can be a good thing... |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 9 I decided to place two reviews in one:
teacherXprincipal?! This is even better than the lesbian teacher (Well we think she is after hearing rumors of her touching people's boobies...) at school. Chapter 9's not that funny, but it's still great! Keep writing! |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 6 School does suck... BTW, do you have any she-man gaurds/teachers in here? |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 5 I pity him so much... horrors a man has to go through... |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 4 You are such a meanie, making us hang there! Damn it! *starts cursing some more and jumping wildly*
PS: Not all girls are giggly and vain. I for one study in an all-girls school and you won't believe the number of manly women I see... |
| amethystdawn 2005-01-28 . chapter 3 Bwahahahahahahahaahahahaha! Let the fun begin!
PS: Can I review every other chapter or something? Else I'll run oput of comments and start repeating myself...
PSS:Are you an anime fan? |
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