That's very in touch! It's Great!

Another great poem. I agree that your rhyme doesn't seemed forced at all. It fits briliantly. Which is no small task!

*sigh* i've read nearly all your works, and i must say, you're good at this! your rhyming doesn't seem forced, and your ideas flow beautifully! lovely themes and imagery here, keep on writing, i'd love to write as well as you! =)

Oohhh....That was a really lovely poem. You have a great style!

Another Writer,
~Leah (Songbird)~

It's very pretty :) I like it.

I love it. If life could only be like that.

Wow, that was reeeeeealy good! I liked it a lot! go r/r my stuff, people!

thats so beautiful! i love the line:
"The ability to take flight
And never ask why"
good job, im going to look at your other work in a minuit ^_^
---Karma---

i really like this. its all sweet and innocent and airy. (dancing in the rain is FUN!!!)
good job.
-arista