Whoot! And you wrote this in middle school?!?! *goggles* Wowe!! Imagine what your writing's like *now*!
I agree with whoever other reviewer liked your ending line. Very effective..sure he's dead, but he wins! :-p
Yeah, right, I'm not an effective reviewer..Maybe my *overtime* working on LM is frying my brain or some such. Yes, that shall be my excuse.
Toodles! (Lily)

LOVED IT!
I just love/adore/swoon over King Arthur and His Knights.
I am constantly looking for every version of all the tales.
Again, great job!

Wow! Great short.. very nicely written, and a unique style I don't see much of on here ;) Great job.. Love the ending line..*claps* Kudos!!