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Jak (kirei_seimei from LJ) 2004-06-10 . chapter 2
I really like this story. I can't see exactly where it's going, especially where Trilliny's r'ship with Arthur will head, but I like the idea of her being spotted for her spirit, her 'flame' and then being swept into such a whirlwind of new things. Although, I have to admit, it *is* a little "Pretty Woman". =D Anyway, I hope you continue it soon, I'd like to find out what happens!
~ Jak
alicesun 2002-02-16 . chapter 1
Shaping well, I was really getting into it and then BAM! it was over. So you have to write more. Soon. Now would be preferable. So keep it up and I'll be looking forward to more
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