hey baby-girl!! wow. this is really good!! i wish i had your ability to capture ones audiance liek you do!!
::KItori:: YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!
*EEP*
::KITORI:: YOU REALLY DO!!!throws Kitori into a jar, and tosses her in the closet* Sorry girl if you're getting a headache too.. but she's just being... Kitori.. and you know how she acts. i love this story... very good. your the talent in our family!

Strange and interesting. I don't much get it right now, but that probably because I need it spelt out in plain words as if telling an idiotic child. I have my ideas, though. And if it's anything like my ideas, I think it'll turn out great. (How's that for vanity?) Anyway, I like it, it be intriguing. So here's my official review of buggance for you to continue soon.

You do a wonderful job setting up Willow's character. Am I right to suspect that she is a fire element? Are you going to put earth, water, and air into the story to? Keep up the good work, I'm eagerly awaiting the nest chapter!