Gosh. I loved it. It was sad but intruiging, because it makes you (or, at least me) wonder what happened before this. Like the 'betrayal' part. I likie. Great job!!
Rose

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I love it.L-O-V-E it

Oh my gosh. This is so utterly creepy! You write very well. I'm just in shock.Great Job.

~*~Faded~*~

Dark, creepy, sent chills up my spine. I LOVE IT.
You used 'alas' once too many but other than that it was good.

hay this was the most of all the one's that i have raid that got to my heart. you realy need to go ferther in your writtings.well you wonted me to coment so hear it is. i really like this one. I will give you my mailing adress and you better mail it to me! se ya lataa


good night sephielya
love mike

wow...you were right when you said sadistic...very good. I was unclear the first time I read it whether the captor was trying to get info from narrator, but I guess he/she is...

coolness