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| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseGosh. I loved it. It was sad but intruiging, because it makes you (or, at least me) wonder what happened before this. Like the 'betrayal' part. I likie. Great job!! Rose |
| darknesslivesinu 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuse:D |
| MidnightShow 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI love it.L-O-V-E it |
| fadedrainbows 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh. This is so utterly creepy! You write very well. I'm just in shock.Great Job. ~*~Faded~*~ |
| Arachnaphobia 2004-02-25 ch 1, | abuseDark, creepy, sent chills up my spine. I LOVE IT. You used 'alas' once too many but other than that it was good. |
| mike 2002-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abusehay this was the most of all the one's that i have raid that got to my heart. you realy need to go ferther in your writtings.well you wonted me to coment so hear it is. i really like this one. I will give you my mailing adress and you better mail it to me! se ya lataa good night sephielya love mike |
| Roland W. Caulfield 2002-02-27 ch 1, | abusewow...you were right when you said sadistic...very good. I was unclear the first time I read it whether the captor was trying to get info from narrator, but I guess he/she is... coolness |