Brava.

Wow you took one of my most beloved child hood tale and added onto the story. Good job! I loved it. I've only gotten through the first few chapters, but so far so good.

You should write more stories like this.

beautiful, beautiful. simply amazing, breathtaking work. i applaud you, dear, for such wonderful idealistic work. :] great read.

The plot, the characters, their developements, the story-telling, the adventure, the danger, the gore, the secrets, the romance! How did you do it? How long did it take you? This was PURE GENIUS. I found it last night and couldn't stop reading 'till six in the morning! I was HOOKED, [haha, im so sorry bad pun]. I was hoping my Peter Pan story would be like this but obviously it could NEVER have been this way. I honestly, can not possibly see any faluts-except that Wendy's character annoys me to no end. But I've never liked Wendy too much anyway. Too much of a wall-flower for my heroine taste. Still, you managed to make me fall into the story, the boys are so believable! And the twists?? AMAZING. The demon! OMGAIGOSH I HAD THE HAWTS FOR NIBS/PETER from the start. Gah! Once more, just genius, pure, pure genius.

I loved that story though the ending was terribly cruel. I was almost in tears for the three I was meant to think were dead. The story was well planned and had an ingenious plot, though it appears you failed to proofread it much. It had many typos and some of the word tenses were off. But I really liked how it all came together. (I was secretely rooting for Nibs from the start.) I now want to go dig out my old Disney VHS of Peter Pan and swoon over it. Though I don't think I'll ever be able to watch it again without thinking of the gorgeous, devilish MAN he becomes. Here is to turning all the women on fictionpress into pedophiles for the wee Mr. Pan.
"These were confessions of love from a fairy boy who had grown into a man." Definitely my favorite quote from the story.
I hope you continue to write, and I am off to read some of your other works.
~EmotionsHaveNoBrains

I remember reading this story from before and trying to review. I also remember that my computer wouldn't let me.
To put it simply, I just wanted to let you know that I loved this.

great story!

Beautiful Story. I love how twisted it became yet how bright the future was in the end. :)

Wow.. Biggest plot twist I've ever encountered. One I didn't expect. It's nice to read something that totally blew my mind away, I'm so sick of reading predictable things. Kudos and thank you.

This isn't really a review for the chapter, I haven't read it yet. But I was thinking.. I'm no Peter Pan buff or anything, but when they were in Neverland, didn't they NOT need pixie dust? I could be wrong, but I was just curious. I'm enjoying this story so far. It's very intriguing. =D

Hm...interesting

I'm speechless right now (and that doesn't happen too often).

This story was amazing. Simply amazing. I'd use more words, but I'm still speechless.

Hugglez,

~ Tigery

Omgsh this story is soo underated! It should have more reviews than this!! I realy enjoyed this story, I thought it was amazing!

Wow. Truly beautiful.

Incredible. Second time I've read it. Favouriting!

Keep up the twisted writing! Its great!