SCORE! More elf dude! elf dude rocked. I KNEW Corbin couldn't be gone! *high fives author, does happy dance* uhuh it's yo birthday...

Ive only read a couple of chapters but I really like this so far!! awesome job, I love it. I'm going to add it to my favorites.

I loved it. Read through the whole story in one go. I can't wait to read the second part. Keep up the good work.

Phoenix

*sobs histerically* how could u kill Corbin? That was so cruel. He betta make more appearances or im goin into depression!
And please not childhood memories or somethin, cant he be ressurected? please!
Ill be your best friend!

Woah! I mean i'm still balling because you killed Corbin *sobs some more* But this is awsome!

*grins* this is GREAT!!!! if you want help with the title give be a brief summery of the whole story not details ulees their really improtant.*don't want to ruin it* you do that and i'll have a list of title's for you to choose from.

great chap. more soon?

YOU UPDATED!!!!! LALALA LALALA!!!! I FEEL SO SPECIAL!!! anyway this is really good. pleze update alittle sooner if you can. I personally liked the idea of the elf dude being around. he was kinda cool. well look at me can i sound any less intelligent in this review, oh well i'm hopeless.

how soon? very soon? kinda soon? soon soon? not really soon? I NEED UPDATE NO CLIFFY HOW COULD YOU!!!!(faints)"OWIEEE!!!!! MY HEAD!!!!" (jumps off floor and rubs back of head, then turn towards stage crew)"WHO FORGOT THE PADDING!!!AARGGHH!!!!!" (pauses)"WHAT!!!!!" (turns to look wide eyed at camera, back at stage crew.)"WHADDA YA MEAN WE'RE ROLLING!!!! WHATS MY LINE????? DO I HAVE A LINE?????"(off stage the director and producer, and etc are looking through the script then mumble, "well, no, after you faint the review should be over except for the narrators line.")"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH"(pulls at hair) "i'm surounded by imbicilic, stupid, foolish, numbskullike, duh-huh, DOODOOHEADS!!!!!(i had to make it pg for younger readers, like the eight- year-old sister peering over my shoulder as i type this.) "ugh" (director yells for narrorator)other than this last cliffy Love the story!!!!

you cant have killed of corbin!!!!
i like the story but if you dont bring corbin back i'll sick my cat on you
(waves cat threateningly at author)
(cat looks a bit annoyed at the prospect of being used to horribly maim evil authors horribly beyond recognition)

NOOOOO...WHY DID YOU KILL HIM?? , but the story is really coool , hope you keep up

Please update! It is a really good story and I would hate to see you stop. It is so interesting and I can't wait to see where it will end!

lol, yay! i like! I Like!!!!

no, seriously, great story!

*Chesire cat grin* love it! really cute story so far!

I'm good to my word. I make sure to read and review anyone who writes me reviews. Thanks for braving the super-long story. :)

I like the beginning to this. I find your main character and Corbin very easy to like. And I usually don't like first person perspective, but for this, I do. :)

Fanfiction.net doesn't bother to indent new paragraphs (I discovered this the hard way), so it might be a good idea to double space between them, just so it's a little easier for people to read.

I'm going to be back for more, but I'm at work right now. So as soon as I have time, I'll return.

-Angie-