awesome story!

This is so cool! You should definitely continue this!!

COOL!IF YOU ASKED ME TO CREATE MY OWN MYTH, I WOULD'NT EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START!THIS IS NICE!

I think it was really stupid. The writer is obviously a crazed, deranged, psychopath. The plot and the way it was written was very good, though. It had "mythical" running all throughout.
The writers personality really reflects in the story. I like the way it described the children. now THAT is a beautiful girl!!!!!!

that was realy good , definatly do a series

Wow! That story was excellent!!! You really should make this a series! You never know, it might become one of the most succesful series around here... Dare to Dream!

really cool story! i luv that kind of stuff

This was an amazing myth. I think you shoudl continue with a series, and I think you should seriously consider a career in writing. I'm not at all surprised that you received an 100 on thie assignment.